new toma fic: a secret (spooky?) trip to hawaii

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new toma fic!!!! i've started working on this since september, but i am not sure if it's that great, and i haven't been able to write a lot yet, so that's why i haven't posted it up until now.... 

this fic continues the long fic i wrote before, which starts here, in case you haven't read it. but you don't really need to read it to understand what's going on in this fic. =) since halloween is this month, i thought i should start posting it (there's some spooky stuff in the fic!) and hopefully i'll be able to finish it within this month. ~___~ this fic is not gonna be that long! maybe it'll go on for around 6 or 7 parts. i don't know why i can never just write a one-shot, i always need 2 write so much. lol....

also, this fic is more of a toma/gakki fic, though the last part, there will be tomapi stuff!!







(view from the Road to Hana, in maui)

PART 1 : the (s)ex

toma woke up suddenly when he heard a noise in his hotel room. it sounded like someone bumping into the table. 

"who's there?" he asked, even though he knew who it was. 

"it's me. sorry! i couldn't sleep and i suddenly remembered that i forgot my phone in your room and just went in to get it" gakki whispered. he saw the light of her phone moving towards the door in the dark.

"it's ok, i'm having trouble sleeping anyway. why don't you stay for a little while?" toma asked, as he got out of bed to turn the lamp on. 

"umm...ok." gakki replied, and sat down on the chair near his bed and toma on the edge of his bed.

they are in hawaii together and have adjoining rooms, with connecting doors inside their rooms that lets them go directly from one room to another. they decided to keep the doors unlocked so that they could freely go from room to room at night, in case there was an emergency and they needed to gather quickly. Because this time of year, Hawaii is prone to hurricanes passing by.

toma, gakki, and her friend, mari, are here together because toma thought it would be awkward if it was just him and gakki. after all, they just broke up a few months ago and this was a secret trip he was taking while yamashita was in brazil visiting his family. toma knew it was risky taking this trip even though yamashita forbade him to go on any trips with gakki, but he had promised her they would go to hawaii together one day, when they were still dating. he felt like this was the least he could do for her after he broke up with her to be with yamashita. 

gakki nervously looked around his room while toma noticed that she was wearing the t-shirt and shorts pajama set that he gave her when they were still together. he smiled to himself and patted the spot next to him on his bed.

"that chair isn't comfortable, come sit next to me on the bed." he said.

"no, it's fine." she quickly said, as she fidgeted with her phone.

"so you forgot your phone in my room? that's funny, because i thought i remembered seeing you put it in your pocket as you left today, after we watched that movie together" toma said, scratching his head.

"really? you must have remembered wrong" gakki said, acting surprised. "it's really late, i won't bother you anymore. i'll just get going now." she quickly said as she got up from the chair. 

toma swiftly grabbed her hand and pulled her down on the bed with him. 

"toma? what are you doing? i have to go." she said, immediately scooting back to sit farther from him.

"you don't have to pretend, gakki. i know you've been sneaking into my room the last 2 nights." toma calmly said. 

"what? no, i haven't!" she laughed nervously and shook her head. "you must have been dreaming."

toma moved closer to her on the bed and quietly said, "you come in...lie down on the bed next to me for a long time...and then you kiss me before you go." 

"no...i don't know what you're talking about. i never did that. i'm not your girlfriend anymore..." gakki nervously said. 

"i know i wasn't dreaming, and i know it was you." toma whispered as he sat closely next to her. "and you kissed me, like this..." 

he gently stroked her face and lightly kissed her on the lips. he pulled back to look at her and she couldn't hold back anymore. they kissed passionately as toma pulled her into his lap. it felt so good to forget about everything else and just hold her and kiss her. finally, gakki pulled away from him and smiled sheepishly.

"i thought you were asleep..." 

"it's hard for me to sleep when i'm staying at a hotel." 

toma softly kissed her a few more times and they smiled sweetly at each other. he stroked her hair and softly whispered "i know it's wrong, but i still love you..." he lightly touched her neck. "i still want you..." 

"toma..." she softly said, as she cupped his face in her hands and kissed him tenderly. 

he missed kissing her like this...feeling her soft lips, her tongue, rubbing against his. toma reached under her shirt and discovered that she wasn't wearing a bra. he caressed her body as he started kissing her neck. gakki moaned softly and clutched his back. toma let go of her so that he could take off his shirt. and he slowly pulled up her t-shirt, at the same time pulling her down to the bed... 

they made love for the first time. it felt amazing...and they didn't want to stop. they kept going, until gakki suddenly pulled away from toma's kiss and frowned.

"what's wrong, are you tired?" toma whispered, as he looked down at her, touching her face gently.

"no..." she replied, smiling and stroking his hair. "you're such a passionate and gentle lover, toma..." 

"so are you." toma smiled. "then what's wrong?" he softly asked, lying down beside her on the bed.

She paused for a moment. "does this mean you'll break up with yamashita to be with me or will we..." gakki hesitantly asked.

"umm...i..." toma turned away from her and stared at the ceiling. "i need some time to think about this...can we talk about this later?" he turned back to face her.

toma screamed. gakki is not there anymore. ohno is now lying next to him, half-naked! 

"idiot! i knew you still like gakki! but you like yamashita too." ohno scolded him, sitting up in bed.

"oh my god! you shouldn't be here!" toma realized that he was dreaming, but he was still mad at ohno for interrupting him and gakki. 

"you know you can't have them both, so why not just pick me?" ohno gave him a sexy smile and kissed him hard. 

toma tried to push him away, but then he couldn't help getting turned on and started kissing him back. 

suddenly, toma woke up, just as ohno had pulled him down on the bed and straddled him! He realized he is a little attracted to ohno, ever since he found out he was bisexual. or maybe even before that. it's embarrassing, but he can't help it. he'll definitely never let him find out and tease him about it, though!

PART 2: the late night chat

toma sat up in bed and rubbed his eyes. he let out a sigh. why? why did he keep having sexy dreams about gakki? they have been in hawaii for two days now, and this is the third night that he's dreamed about her. after they broke up, toma has gradually gone from loving her as a girlfriend to loving her as a friend. he's already made up his mind that he wants to be with yamashita. anyway, after he found out he was bi, he's been more attracted to guys than girls. Not that he is flirting with other guys, just that sometimes he'll find himself noticing a cute guy or something.

These days, the only guy on his mind is yamashita. he's in brazil, only 5 hours ahead of hawaii time. toma didn't expect to miss him so much. even though he's having fun in hawaii with gakki, but he keeps wishing yamashita was here too. he turns on his laptop and rereads their chat from last night. 

toma: hey.

yamashita: heyyyyy. 

toma: i miss you, yamashita. 

yamashita: i miss you, too! 

toma: but it must be nice to be with your family, be in a different country... 

yamashita: i guess...but i visit them every year, so... 

toma: oh...what did you do today? anything fun?

yamashita: i went to a mall, watched a movie, and went to a nice beach with them. it was kind of fun at the beach. the sunset was beautiful. wish you were there with me. it was the perfect moment to kiss your boyfriend or girlfriend... xD i saw a few couples kissing and hugging and i got so jealous! 

toma: lol. but i don't think you would be in the mood to kiss me, with your family there with you.

yamashita: well, i would have made some excuse to get us some privacy, of course! xD

toma: right! hehe.

yamashita: i miss kissing you... 

toma: me too. we can kiss a lot when you're home. 

yamashita: definitely! i want to kiss you over and over...while we're naked.

toma: ah, you're so naughty! but...me too. geez, don't turn me on when you're not even here!

yamashita: sorry, sorry! haha. oh, i took a picture of the sunset. i'll email it to you. hold on...

toma: great! ok... wow!! it's beautiful!! we should go to the beach and watch the sunset together when you come back. 

yamashita: yeah! hey toma...i'm sending you a picture of me that i just took right now.

toma: eh? oh, a cute pouty pic! so that's what your room looks like. nice! 

yamashita: you too, send me a picture of you.

toma: huh?

yamashita: send me a picture of you right now. i want to see you.

toma: umm...sorry, i forgot my phone at home. i'm at the coffee shop right now.

yamashita: eh? oh... that's ok. but you usually don't like using your laptop at the coffee shop? it's noisy and girls keep flirting with you.

toma: haha. yeah, but tonight i felt like going out. 

yamashita: oh...have any girls flirted with you yet?

toma: nope, not yet. maybe cuz i'm wearing glasses, my hair is messy, and i'm wearing my old, oversized grey hoodie. haha.

yamashita: lol.

toma: what about you? have any pretty brazilian girls flirted with you? 

yamashita: no, but some cute japanese girls and guys have. xD 

toma: guys too? wahhhh...

yamashita: yeah...there was one guy that was really gorgeous too. 

toma: ehhhh... 

yamashita: don't be jealous! of course i turned them all down.

toma: i'm not jealous...i know you wouldn't cheat on me. maybe just little envious that you have so many admirers though. lol.

yamashita: haha. hey, have you ever noticed a guy checking you out yet?

toma: uh...i don't think so, but maybe it's cuz i've never noticed when guys look at me, until recently. i have to admit, though, recently...i sometimes find myself looking at cute guys... i'm sorry!

yamashita: lol. you don't have to apologize for that. sometimes i notice cute guys or girls too. it's like a reflex, you can't help it. someone good-looking walks by, and you tend to look at them, even if you've already got a boyfriend. it's ok.

toma: i guess you're right... i love how we can be honest with each other like this.

yamashita: me too. i feel like we can talk about anything...and i really trust you, toma. i don't think you'd ever lie to me. you're not like my previous boyfriends. 

toma: yamashita, i trust you too. and i would never lie to you...except little white lies are ok, right? 

yamashita: yes. lol. i do it sometimes, too...

toma: whew. haha... um... it's kind of late, are you tired?

yamashita: i'm a little sleepy, but i want to chat with you some more.

toma: no, you should go to sleep. your family probably has a lot more things planned to do with you tomorrow. 

yamashita: yeah... 

toma: we can chat again tomorrow night. go to bed. i don't want you to fall asleep while we're chatting. lol.

yamashita: haha. ok. good night! 

toma: good night!

yamashita: *goodnight kiss on your cheek*

toma: aw...see you tomorrow.

yamashita: see ya. 

Toma sighed. he feels so guilty, lying to yamashita like this. could this be considered a little white lie? no. but if he told yamashita the truth... toma sighed again and turned off his laptop and the lamp, and got into bed. 

suddenly he had a creepy feeling that someone was watching him. he looked around his dark room. no, he was probably just imagining things. it was because on the 1st day they were here, the bellboy told them that toma's room is supposedly haunted. there's a rumor that a girl whose boyfriend cheated on her...she jumped to her death from the balcony many years ago. toma had shrugged it off in front of gakki and mari, saying he's not scared and it's probably just a rumor, but sometimes at night, the room does seem a little spooky.

toma looks out the window and stares at the thin, bright crescent moon. he smiles to himself and thinks "idiot, the only thing you should be worried about is yamashita finding out about this trip, not about ghosts! you're in hawaii...relax!" he closed his eyes and soon fell asleep.

a dark shadowy figure silently moved across toma's room as he slept...

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some notes:
-sorry about the spacing. i don't know why LJ still eliminates all the spacing and it's too troublesome to correct it, so i hope you don't mind reading it like that.

-when i was little, my family went on a trip somewhere and we stayed in a hotel with adjoining rooms and there were  connecting doors and i thought that was really awesome!! haha. i thought it would make things more interesting if they can go in each other's rooms whenever they want...

-i know ppl will hate toma for cheating on pi with gakki, even if only in a dream... but i just want them to finally consummate the relationship. >////////< and it's just a dream, so they can do it without having real life consequences...kind of!! xD

-i'm changing the way i write 'gakky'. i think gakki looks better than gakky, and it seems like the more correct way to shorten her name, anyway, since her last name is aragaki.